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The Unown Map

New symbols appear on an ancient path. Smeargle tries to copy them, but the map only begins to make sense when someone stops looking at it from one place.

9 min read · Exploration ·
Smeargle studies a sandstone waymarker while an Unown floats beside it.

A mark in the wrong place

Smeargle had painted the first stone seven times and still did not like the result. Its hollow circle ought to have been simple. Yet every time Smeargle stepped back, the painted circle seemed too wide or too high or just slightly wrong in a way that made its tail twitch. Beside the stone, an Unown floated without offering any useful opinion.

The marks had appeared overnight along the old canyon path. Yesterday, the sandstone pillars were bare except for weather stains and lichen. This morning, each carried a dark shape that looked painted but could not be rubbed off. The traveling surveyor, Esra, had asked Smeargle to copy them before the next sandstorm. She spread a sheet of paper on a flat rock and weighted its corners.

A Dunsparce slept beneath that rock. Every time Esra adjusted a weight, it opened one eye and sighed at the disturbance. It had watched several generations of visitors photograph the stones, argue about the stones, and picnic beside the stones. None had followed the path past the third bend, where the canyon seemed to end against an unbroken wall. Dunsparce did not think much of their investigations.

Esra checked the seven copies. 'Maybe they're letters,' she said. Smeargle considered that. The Unown drifted toward the first stone and stopped directly over its mark. For a moment, the two shapes lined up so neatly that Smeargle could not tell which outline belonged to which. Then Esra moved the paper, and the Unown turned sideways. The stone's shape seemed to turn too.

It had not changed. Smeargle knew that, but now it saw what the copies had missed. The mark continued around the pillar's curved side. From the front, it looked like a flattened circle. From halfway along the path, the far edge came into view and the proportions settled. Smeargle hurried to the new position, tail lifted. This copy finally looked right.

There was something beyond the circle as well. Through its open center, seen from that particular angle, a notch in the opposite canyon wall fitted exactly. Esra stood beside Smeargle and looked from the paper to the notch. Then she looked at the next pillar, farther down the path. It had a straight mark that pointed in no sensible direction from where she stood.

They packed the paper. Dunsparce rose with a dusty rustle and followed, mainly because their feet had blocked its morning sun. The Unown drifted ahead. Smeargle kept glancing backward to see whether the first shape would change again. It did not change, but it stopped making sense. The map, if this was a map, was beginning to insist that they move.

Smeargle sees a canyon notch line up with the opening in a stone's curved mark.
The first symbol becomes useful from one particular place on the path.

The path does the reading

At the second stone, Esra tried the obvious thing. She stood in front, held out the first drawing, and matched its notch to the horizon. Nothing lined up. She moved left. Nothing improved. Dunsparce passed between her shoes and crawled up the path toward a low patch of shade. When it stopped, Smeargle noticed that the straight mark on the stone had become an arrow.

The arrow was not carved like an arrow. It was a line meeting the natural edge of the pillar, with a chip in the sandstone forming its point. From anywhere else, those pieces separated. From Dunsparce's position, they fitted. Esra crouched beside it. 'It depends on the path,' she said. She drew a small footprint beside the second copy, to record where a reader ought to stand.

Smeargle added turquoise dots to the dust rather than the ancient stones. The dots marked useful viewpoints without covering what they had come to study. Unown circled the pillar, then drifted ahead again. Esra stopped calling the shapes letters. Letters were supposed to remain readable when written on paper. These belonged partly to stone, partly to the canyon, and partly to the person looking.

The third marker stood beside a dry channel. Its shape appeared to close off the route: two dark bars across a gap, with a heavy curve above them. Esra looked disappointed. Beyond it lay the familiar wall that every earlier visitor had described. Perhaps the marks were simply a beautiful way of announcing a dead end. Smeargle had spent all morning copying a very elaborate refusal.

Dunsparce slid down into the dry channel. Its body left a narrow trail in the dust. From below, the marker's two bars lined up with a ledge on the far wall, and the curve became the underside of an arch. Smeargle climbed down after it. The wall no longer looked solid. A slim opening appeared beneath an overhang, hidden from anyone standing on the main path.

Esra inspected the ground before following. The channel was dry, but storm debris caught in its sides showed that it sometimes carried fast water. She checked the clear sky and chose a route across the higher stones. Smeargle followed her footprints. It wanted to hurry into the opening, but the useful viewpoints had already taught it that arrival was not the only thing worth thinking about.

The passage widened beyond the overhang. Its shade smelled of cool sand and old rain. At the far end stood another pillar, smaller than the first three, and its mark looked almost like a closed eye. Unown stopped above it. Dunsparce settled on a warm stone nearby. Esra unfolded her paper again, although the drawing now seemed less important than the journey that had produced it.

Smeargle and Dunsparce discover an archway beneath the canyon overhang.
What looks like a closed wall from the trail becomes an opening from below.

Wait is also a direction

The fourth shape refused every experiment. They looked at it from the passage, from the pillar's left side, and from a little ridge on its right. Smeargle crouched until its nose nearly touched the sand. Esra stood on a safe flat rock to see from above. The eye stayed closed. Beyond the pillar, the passage ended in a round chamber with a stone roof and no visible door.

There were narrow slots in that roof. At first, Esra mistook them for damage. Then she noticed their smooth edges and regular spacing. Sunlight entered through one slot and formed a thin golden line on the chamber floor. The line lay well away from the fourth pillar's shadow. Smeargle tried to sketch it, but by the time the paint touched paper, the light had moved.

They had been assuming that every mark told them where to go. Perhaps the fourth told them when to look. Esra found a comfortable place in the shade and drank from her flask. Smeargle was less comfortable. Waiting felt like leaving a drawing unfinished. It paced around the chamber, tracing the roof slots with its eyes, while Dunsparce took the opportunity to sleep again.

As afternoon thinned, the golden line reached the curved base of the pillar. Its shadow stretched across the floor. Seen from the passage entrance, the dark eye on the stone and the long shadow below it formed a new shape. An opening appeared at its center, but only as a patch of light. Smeargle walked to that patch. A low circular bench stood against the chamber wall.

From the bench, the narrow roof slots joined into one long window. Esra sat beside Smeargle and looked up. The window framed a strip of western sky, just above the canyon ridge. It would catch the first evening stars as the sun went down. The chamber was an observatory, modest and carefully placed, hidden because its builders had wanted a particular view rather than a grand entrance.

Unown floated through the last beam of sunlight. Other dark shapes appeared at the roof's edge, so quietly that neither traveler could say when they had arrived. They passed across the sky window without blocking it for long. Smeargle did not count them. It put down its tail and watched. For once, copying every detail seemed less necessary than being there while the details happened.

The first star appeared. Then a second, far enough apart to make the gap between them feel vast. Esra opened the notebook but left the page blank. She had come for a record of symbols and found a set of instructions for attention. Dunsparce woke, stretched, and climbed onto the bench between them. Apparently, this was the only interesting part of the investigation.

Smeargle and an Unown watch evening stars through the observatory's roof opening.
The final mark asks its readers to wait for the sky to change.

A map left unfinished

They returned by the same path while the canyon still held a little light. Esra had marked their turns on paper and carried a lamp for the shaded passages. Smeargle followed carefully, resisting the urge to add permanent arrows. The stones had survived many seasons without its paint. Visitors could be guided without changing the old surfaces or turning a quiet place into somebody's signature.

At the first pillar, Esra laid out all four copies. Viewed together, they were an untidy collection: a stretched circle, a line, two bars, and an eye. Nothing in the drawings announced a canyon path or a room for stars. A person could stare at the sheet for hours and miss what they had found in one afternoon. Smeargle thought of its seven attempts to fix the first circle.

It had tried to make the shape perfect before understanding what perfection meant. The mark's strange proportions were useful precisely because they looked right from one place and wrong from another. Smeargle touched the edge of a failed copy. A mistake on paper could sometimes be a correct part of something larger. That was a thought worth keeping, although it would be difficult to paint.

Back at the survey camp, Esra made a walking guide rather than a translation. She described the safe route, the viewpoints, and the need to avoid the dry channel during wet weather. Beside the final mark she wrote that the chamber should be reached in time to sit quietly before sunset. She did not write that she knew who had built it, or why the Unown had returned.

Smeargle contributed four small pictures. In each, the traveler stood somewhere different. The canyon mattered as much as the symbol. Dunsparce appeared in the third picture, taking a route beneath the overhang, and in the fourth, asleep before the stars. Esra smiled at that last detail. It would remind impatient readers that a map could require stillness after all its walking.

The next morning, the dark marks were gone. The pillars wore only weather stains and lichen, just as they had before. Esra checked every stone twice. Smeargle waited beside the first one, tail lowered, feeling a little cheated. Then sunlight reached the canyon notch. Even without the painted circle, it knew where to stand. The view was still there. So was the path.

A single Unown appeared above the ridge and slipped away toward the western sky. Smeargle did not chase it. It packed the walking guide, woke Dunsparce with an apologetic nudge, and started toward the observatory again. This time it carried a clean sheet for whatever it might notice, not for answers it expected to find. The unfinished page moved gently in the breeze, making room for another afternoon.

An original fan-created story by the Poke Fun Play editorial team. Illustrations generated for this adventure.

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